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:cd: Weightless - Black Lab :cd:

I can see
See you there
Hanging there weightless in the air

Who is to say?
Who is to know the truth?

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Just felt like drawing a dragon and space and it turned into this. :XD: The music helped. :D

Please critique!
I really like this piece, and I think that keeps me from noticing errors. SO BE BRUTAL. Lol. Just not too brutal. :XD:
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I won't be too brutal <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>
While most of the anatomy would be considerably correct (taking into consideration that dragons have no earthly correct counterpart) but the hips seem a little off to me. I would probably try making them a little more curved and compare. Which ever looked better would be the one to keep.
The coloration gets a little lost in the background towards the back end, so maybe some edge highlighting might help fix that. The same goes for the face where it overlaps the wing.
The background is very simplified for a 'space' scene and because there is not much variation, it kind of just blends to the eye into a gradiant blob. I'd reccomend to vary the spacing and size and even color of the stars, and maybe toss in a couple 'galaxy' shapes or even a black hole in the distance background. The color choices are agood selection, but you might want to use some hard lines and sharper color transitions for some wispy space dust. You know what I mean?
Overall, this is a beautiful and well done piece, and I don't think much change is necessary, but it might enhance it even more. Very Well Done, CrazyK913.